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Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2
Tugas Toefl
2.
Because they had spent too many time
considering the new contract, the student lost the opportunity to
lease the apartement.
Revise : Because they had spent many time
considering the new contract, the student lost the opportunity to lease the
apartement
3. These
televisions are all too expensive for we to buy at this time, but
perhaps we will return leter.
Revise: These televisions are all too expensive
for us to buy at
this time, but perhaps we will return leter.
4.
After she had bought himself a new
automobile, she sold her bicycle.
Revise : After she had bought herself a new
automobile, she sold her bicycle.
5.
The next important question we have to decide is when do we have to
submit the proposal.
Revise : The next important question we have to
decide is when we have to
submit the proposal
6.
George has not completed the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t neither.
Revise : George has not completed
the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t
too.
7.
Jhon decide to buy in the morning a new car, but in
the afternoon he changed his mind.
Revise : Jhon decide to buy a new car in the morning, but in
the afternoon he changed his mind.
8.
Some of the plants in this store require very little care, but
this one needs much more sunlight than the others ones.
Revise : Some of the plants in this store require very
little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than the others one.
9.
After George had
returned to his house, he was reading a book.
Revise : After
George returned to
his house, he was reading a book.
10. Many
theories on conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but not one has been
as widely eccepted as this one.
Revise : Many theories on conserving the purity of water has been
proposed, but no one
has been as widely eccepted as this one.
11. The food
that Mark is
cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.
Revise : The food that Mark’s cooking in the kitchen is smelling
delicious.
12. After Jhon eaten dinner,
he wrote several letters and went to bed.
Revise : After Jhon dinner, he
wrote several letters and went to bed.
13. The
manager has finished working on
the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.
Revise : The manager has finished on the report last
night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.
14. Because
Sam and Michelle had done all of the work theirselves, they were unwilling to
give the result to Joan.
Revise : Because Sam and Michelle had done all of the work them, they
were unwilling to give the result to Joan.
15. Daniel
said that if he had to do another homework tonight, he would not be able to attend
the concert.
Revise : Daniel said that if he had to do another
homework tonight, he would
not to attend the concert.
16. After to
take the medication, the patient became drowsy and more manageable.
Revise : After to take the medication, the patient become drowsy and
more manageable.
17. We insist
on you
leaving the
meeting before any further outbursts take place.
Revise : We insist on you are leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take
place.
18. It has
been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, isn’t it?
Revise : It has been a long time since we have talked to
Jhon, hasn’t
it?
19. Henry
objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon does so.
Revise : Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval
of our attorney, and Jhon too.
20. Rita
enjoyed to be
able to meet several members of congress during her vacation.
Revise : Rita enjoyed to be able to meet several members of congress during her vacation
21. After
being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decidedfind another
attorney.
Revise : After being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed
mobster decided found another
attorney.
22. Harry’s
advisor persuaded his
taking several
courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.
Revise : Harry’s advisor persuaded him to take several
courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.
23. The
only teacher who were required
to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.
Revise : The
only teacher who required
to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.
24. The work performed by these officers are not
worth our paying them any
longer.
Revise : The work performed by
these officers are not worth our payingthem.
25. The
president went fishing after he has finished with the conferences.
Revise : The president went fishing
after he had
finished with
the conferences.
26. Peter
and Tom plays tennis
every afternoon with Mary and me.
Revise : Peter and Tom playing tennis
every afternoon with Mary and me.
