Tugas Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2 - Toefl 2

Nama : Dani Hamdani
NPM  : 16209229
Kelas   : 4EA08

Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2

1.       It is difficult to get used to sleep in a tent after having a soft, comfortable bed to lie on.
Revise
It is difficult to get used to sleeping in a tent after having a soft, comfortable bed to lie on.

2.       Marry usually arrives at the office at nine o’clock, but because the storm, she was two hours late.
Revise
Marry usually arrives at the office at nine o’clock, but because of the storm, she was two hours late.

3.       Many excited women could seen at the department store sale.
Revise
Many excited women could is seen at the department store sale.

4.       He likes her new job very much and works hard.
Revise
He likes her his new job very much and works hard.

5.       No one would have attended the lecture if you told the truth about the guest speaker.
Revise
No one would have attended the lecture if you told the truth about the guest speaker.

6.       He did not attend the meeting last week, and either I do.
Revise
He did not attend the meeting last week, and neither do I.

7.       Bess is used to fly after having crossed the continent many times during the past decade.
Revise
Bess is used to flying after having crossed the continent many times during the past decade.

8.       Sam used to living in Oklahoma, but his company had him transferred to be a better position in Georgia.
Revise
Sam used to live in Oklahoma, but his company had him transferred to be a better position in Georgia.

9.       The president went fishing after he has finished with the conference.
Revise
The president went fishing after he had finish with the conference

10.   He did not attend the meeting        last week, and neither I do.
Revise
He did not attend the meeting         last week, and neither do I.

11.   Anybody who plants to attend the meeting ought send a short note to the chairperson.
Revise
Anybody who plants to attend the meeting modals a short note to the chairperson.

12.   No one in our office wants to drive to work any more because of there are always traffic  jams at rush hour.
Revise
No one in our office wants to drive to work any more because  there are always traffic  jams at rush hour.

Tugas Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2 - Conditional & Passive Voice

Nama        : Dani Hamdani
NPM         : 16209229
Kelas        : 4EA08

Passive Voice and Conditional Sentence

1.     Passive Voice

Kalimat aktif (active voice) adalah kalimat dimana subject-nya melakukan pekerjaan, sebaliknya, kalimat pasif (passive voice) adalah kalimat dimana subject-nya dikenai pekerjaan oleh object kalimat. Active voice lebih sering digunakan dalam kehidupan sehari-hari dibandingkan dengan passive voice. Namun demikian, sering kita temukan passive voice di surat-surat kabar, artikel-artikel di majalah-majalah dan tulisan-tulisan ilmiah. Passive voice digunakan karena object dari active voice merupakan informasi yang lebih penting dibandingkan dengan subject-nya.

Contoh :

Active : We fertilize the soil every 6 months

Passive: The soil is fertilized by us every 6 months

Berdasarkan keenam poin di atas maka passive voice mengikuti pola sebagai berikut:

Subject + be + Verb3 + by + Object + modifier

2.    Conditional sentences

Conditional sentences

conditional sentences (kalimat pengandaian). Conditional sentences terdiri dari dua bagian, yaitu subordinate clause (if-clause) yang merupakan pernyataan syarat dan main clause yang merupakan akibat terpenuhi atau tidaknya syarat yang terkandung dalam subordinate clause.
Conditional sentences ada tiga jenis. Berikut ini akan kita bahas satu-persatu :

if clause : simple present tense
main clause : simple future tense

Pada tipe 1 ini suatu tindakan dalam main clause akan terjadi bila syarat dalam if-clause terpenuhi.

Example :
If I have a lot of money, I will buy a new car.

Sumber: http://erwinprayuda.blogspot.com/2011/03/penjelasan-passive-voice-conditional.html

Tugas Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2 - Revise Toefl

Nama : Dani Hamdani

NPM  : 16209229

Kelas  : 4EA08

Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2
Tugas Toefl

2.      Because they had spent too many time considering the new contract, the student lost the  opportunity to lease the apartement.

Revise : Because they had spent  many time considering the new contract, the student lost the opportunity to lease the apartement

3.      These televisions are all too expensive for we to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return leter.

Revise: These televisions are all too expensive for us to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return leter.

4.      After she had bought himself a new automobile, she sold her bicycle.

Revise : After she had bought herself a new automobile, she sold her bicycle.

5.      The next important question we have to decide is when do we have to submit the proposal.

Revise : The next important question we have to decide is when  we have to submit the proposal

6.      George has not completed the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t neither.

Revise : George has not completed the assignment yet, and Mario neither.

7.      Jhon decide to buy in the morning a new car, but in the afternoon he changed his mind.

Revise : Jhon decide to buy a new car in the morning, but in the afternoon he changed his mind.

8.      Some of the plants in this store require very little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than the others ones.

Revise : Some of the plants in this store require very little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than the others one.

9.      After George had returned to his house, he was reading a book.

Revise : After George had returned to his house, he was read a book.

10.  Many theories on conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but not one has been as widely eccepted as this one.

Revise : Many theories on conserving the purity of water have been proposed, but not one has been as widely eccepted as this one.

11.  The food that Mark is cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.

Revise : The food that Mark is cooking in the kitchen is smells delicious.

12.  After  Jhon eaten dinner, he wrote several letters and went to bed.

Revise : After  Jhon had eaten, he wrote several letters and went to bed.

13.  The manager has finished working on the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.

Revise : The manager finish working on the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.

14.  Because Sam and Michelle had done all of the work theirselves, they were unwilling to give the result to Joan.

Revise : Because Sam and Michelle had done all of the work them selves, they were unwilling to give the result to Joan.

15.  Daniel said that if he had to do another homework tonight, he would not be able to attend the concert.

Revise : Daniel said that if he had to do anymore homework tonight, he would not be able  to attend the concert.

16.  After to take the medication, the patient became drowsy and more manageable.

Revise : After taking the medication, the patient became drowsy and more manageable.

17.  We insist on you leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take place.

Revise : We insist on you’re leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take place.

18.  It has been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, isn’t it?

Revise : It has been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, hasn’t it?

19.  Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon does so.

Revise : Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon does too.

20.  Rita enjoyed to be able to meet several members of congress during her vacation.

Revise : Rita enjoyed to being able to meet several members of congress during her  vacation

21.  After being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided find another attorney.

Revise :  After being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided found another attorney.

22.  Harry’s advisor persuaded his taking several courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.

Revise :   Harry’s advisor persuaded him to take several courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.

23.  The only teacher who were required to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.

Revise :   The only teacher who were  required to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and i.

24.   The work performed by these officers are not worth our paying them any longer.

Revise :   The work performed by these officers is not worth our paying them any longer.

25.  The president went fishing after  he has finished with the conferences.

Revise :   The president went fishing after  he had finished with the conferences.

26.  Peter and Tom plays tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.

Revise :   Peter and Tom play tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.

27. There were a time that I used to swim five laps every day, but now I do not have enough time.

Revise: There a time that I used to swim five laps every day, but now I do not have enough time.

Nama : Dani Hamdani
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Bahasa Inggris Bisnis 2
Tugas Toefl

2.      Because they had spent too many time considering the new contract, the student lost the  opportunity to lease the apartement.

Revise : Because they had spent  many time considering the new contract, the student lost the opportunity to lease the apartement

3.      These televisions are all too expensive for we to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return leter.

Revise: These televisions are all too expensive for us to buy at this time, but perhaps we will return leter.

4.      After she had bought himself a new automobile, she sold her bicycle.

Revise : After she had bought herself a new automobile, she sold her bicycle.

5.      The next important question we have to decide is when do we have to submit the proposal.

Revise : The next important question we have to decide is when  we have to submit the proposal

6.      George has not completed the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t neither.

Revise : George has not completed the assignment yet, and Mario hasn’t too.

7.      Jhon decide to buy in the morning a new car, but in the afternoon he changed his mind.

Revise : Jhon decide to buy a new car in the morning, but in the afternoon he changed his mind.

8.      Some of the plants in this store require very little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than the others ones.

Revise : Some of the plants in this store require very little care, but this one needs much more sunlight than the others one.

9.      After George had returned to his house, he was reading a book.

Revise : After George returned to his house, he was reading a book.

10.  Many theories on conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but not one has been as widely eccepted as this one.

Revise : Many theories on conserving the purity of water has been proposed, but no one has been as widely eccepted as this one.

11.  The food that Mark is cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.

Revise : The food that Mark’s cooking in the kitchen is smelling delicious.

12.  After  Jhon eaten dinner, he wrote several letters and went to bed.

Revise : After  Jhon dinner, he wrote several letters and went to bed.

13.  The manager has finished working on the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.

Revise : The manager has finished on the report last night, and now she will begin to write the other proposal.

14.  Because Sam and Michelle had done all of the work theirselves, they were unwilling to give the result to Joan.

Revise : Because Sam and Michelle had done all of the work them, they were unwilling to give the result to Joan.

15.  Daniel said that if he had to do another homework tonight, he would not be able to attend the concert.

Revise : Daniel said that if he had to do another homework tonight, he would not  to attend the concert.

16.  After to take the medication, the patient became drowsy and more manageable.

Revise : After to take the medication, the patient become drowsy and more manageable.

17.  We insist on you leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take place.

Revise : We insist on you are leaving the meeting before any further outbursts take place.

18.  It has been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, isn’t it?

Revise : It has been a long time since we have talked to Jhon, hasn’t it?

19.  Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon does so.

Revise : Henry objects to our buying this house without the approval of our attorney, and Jhon too.

20.  Rita enjoyed to be able to meet several members of congress during her vacation.

Revise : Rita enjoyed to be able to meet several members of congress during her  vacation

21.  After being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decidedfind another attorney.

Revise :  After being indicted for his part in a bank robbery, the reputed mobster decided found another attorney.

22.  Harry’s advisor persuaded his taking several courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.

Revise :   Harry’s advisor persuaded him to take several courses which did not involve much knowledge of mathematics.

23.  The only teacher who were required to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.

Revise :   The only teacher who required to attend the meeting were Gorge, Betty, Jill, and me.

24.   The work performed by these officers are not worth our paying them any longer.

Revise :   The work performed by these officers are not worth our payingthem.

25.  The president went fishing after  he has finished with the conferences.

Revise :   The president went fishing after  he had finished with the conferences.

26.  Peter and Tom plays tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.

Revise :   Peter and Tom playing tennis every afternoon with Mary and me.